Thursday, November 29, 2007

I Did It!!!!!


While I'm nowhere near to being finished with this silly little project, I surpassed my 50,000 word requirement for Nanowrimo (though my week has been so crazy I honestly couldn't tell you if it happened yesterday or today). "The Ending Dream" isn't even remotely finished (I've barely scratched the surface on Part One of the novel, to be perfectly honest) and I won't even say it's my best work (my writing has taken something of a strange turn this year...which isn't necessarily a bad thing, mind you), but it was a fun distraction, and since I'd so long intended to work on this project I'm going to try my best to keep rolling with it. Of course, I also have about four novels worth of already written material that desperately needs revision...oh, well, one thing at a time.

In other news (and I should have blogged about this days ago), M&M (or "Mom & Michael", as they're more popularly referred to) are moving to Washington! Michael actually arrived on Tuesday after a very lengthy drive, and we're excited to have them about...it'll be nice to add to the repertoire of local family folks (and it seems that my baby bro may be joining us, as well...it's going to get crowded, I think).

In the meantime, I'm going to lay off on the excessive blogging for a while. My darling wife signed me up for Nanoblowpo...no, wait...Nanoblomo...wherein one was supposed to blog every day for the month of November. Well, I nearly did it (one post was eaten, and I missed one day this week), but in the meantime I'll be back to my once a week or so blog postings.

November is nearly finished -- have a great weekend, and bring on December! I can take it! (Wait, no...not in the face!!!!...)

Tuesday, November 27, 2007

Writing Update (And Little Else)

Work is hell. Enjoy the widgit.

Monday, November 26, 2007

Tis' the Season

Christmas Shopping!!!! Ahhhhhhh!!!!!

I actually enjoy Christmas shopping. I love the buying of "loot" for others (especially kids) and anticipating their opening it days/weeks/months down the road. I love searching through wish lists, standing in line at stores and hunting down great sales. I love trying (generally unsuccessfully) to come up with new, original or even just unexpected ideas of what to grab for people. I love hiding the loot, wrapping the loot and then showing off the wrapped/hidden loot in oblique manners to pique the curiosity of the intended gift recipients.

I may be a bit insane for liking all of these things. But so be it.

What I DON'T like is budgeting for Christmas. This year, we've had unexpected car repair bills, unexpected medical bills, the unending headache of mortgage and credit card payments, and a trip to DC for my daughter looming juuuuust over the horizon. Because of budgeting headaches, I think I can understand why some people don't like Christmas, or at the very least don't get as excited about it as perhaps they used to. I'm trying -- desperately trying -- not to become one of those people. It's tough, but I know I can do it.

To everyone who may be feeling a bit dragged down by the whole "sick of gift buying/gift budgeting" flu this holiday season, here's what I tell myself when I feel the bite: keep your chin up. You'll work through it, just like you always have. And, in the end, you'll be a happier person for all your efforts. :)

(This unusually chipper blog post brought to you by the letter "A", for: Accountant who's finally done with stupid a$$ meetings for the day...)


Sunday, November 25, 2007

Lost while waiting for "Lost"...

I don't want to dwell, or sound like too much of a fanboy, but I'll admit it right now: I'm a "Lostie". I'm re-watching Seasons 1 and 2 in anticipation of acquiring my DVD copy of Season 3, which I of course plan to devour and re-watch in preparation for Season 4, which should, at the very least, prove interesting.

The only thing I don't like about "Lost" is that most other shows just can't even compete with it for my attention. Do I know every secret and every connection? Do I fully comprehend what the heck is going on and where things are going? Do I have my expectations on how things should turn out so I can be disappointed when the ending doesn't fit my theories? The answer is "Heck No!" on all counts, and I wouldn't have it any other way.

"Lost" is, quite simply put, a continually intriguing, exciting, and entertaining slice of intellectualized science fiction/mystery, and, in my humble opinion, it's getting better and better as it rolls along. Some have accused "Lost" of spinning its own wheels or being directionless, but I almost hesitate to acknowledge those arguments. "Lost" is consistent with delivering what it's viewers have come to expect. It is a show that delights in presenting mysteries, not solving them. It is a show that delights in the journey as much as -- if not more than -- the destination. It is a nigh unsolvable labyrinth of Byzantine connections and intriguing plot twists.

In the end, when the series is finished and all secrets have been revealed, the payoff will probably pale in comparison to the build up that got us there, but no matter: I've thoroughly enjoyed the journey much more than I have with almost any other television show I've ever watched, and I'm glad to be a part of the "Lost Experience", wherever it may end up going.


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Saturday, November 24, 2007

Excerpt from "The Ending Dream" (Chapter One, Further Continued...)

All eyes turned in his direction. Dane stood as tall as he could, and raised his sword over his head. The gust of wind that rushed at him was almost strong enough to pitch him off of the cliff, but he stood firm and tightened his frozen fingers grip on his vrataar. One Gorgoloth held firm to their Crujian prisoner, while another stood over the humans, maul poised over the head of the woman, who chose that moment to stop screaming: her eyes were locked on the enormous stone and metal hammer head, which was easily as large as she was.

That left one Gorgoloth to advance on Dane. The giant’s leonine mane flowed like a pale cape in the thick wind; his pale simian fangs were stained red, and his thick and knotted ebon muscles were bound in a mesh of chain and bone. He stood just over eight feet tall, and he held a massive flail in each hand; their spiked tips dangled close to the stone as he advanced, where they struck down and flared like flints.

Dane held his sword high. Coming up the incline, the Gorgoloth would have little height advantage over him, even if his reach with those flails would be difficult to get around. Movement flashed in Dane’s eyes on the other side of the bridge, but he focused on the advancing giant. He felt the Cruj’ inhuman eyes on him, watching, more intent than all of the rest. He felt himself teeter as the giant ascended: the slope was ice blue stone covered in brittle snow and scree as sharp as blades. Dane glanced over the side: the bitter bank terminated like a cut into the endless stale fog that choked the air like a rancid breath.

He heard the chain snap, saw the iron head sail towards him, but he was far ahead of his opponent: in a fluid motion Dane rolled forward, well within the arc of the swinging stone, and in a quick cut he severed the chain and sent the flail head flying through the air behind him. They were frozen in a dream: Dane dreamily watched the Gorgoloth draw back his left arm and pull the other flail into the air, but Dane dove at him, and moved up and into his chest with the vrataar with such speed that the giant’s body shuddered as it folded itself over the blade. Cold blood fell onto Dane’s arm and neck as he twisted the blade, shifted the massive weight away from himself, and with a heave sent the massive body over the side. The giant cried out as his black body was swallowed in the bed of frothy smoke below.

Voices sounded up above. Dane saw another woman – a warrior, from the looks of her, familiar and yet entirely unknown to him – ascend from the opposite end of the bridge, a mirror of his own position. More Gorgoloth trailed behind her, rushing at her with axes and enormous spears while she made a dangerously fast descent down the slope; bits of loose stone and black ice fell away before her.

Dane felt the ground shift, and he heard a loud crack of stone. There was too much weight on the bridge. The ship’s wood creaked, loudly, as if voicing its protest. The Gorgoloth on the bridge looked back and forth between Dane and the dame. Time seemed to freeze as Dane readied himself for the hammer blow that would follow. The dame, he saw, also had a vrataar in hand, and for a moment, even though he couldn’t clearly see her at that distance he knew that at that moment they locked eyes, that they saw in each other a kindred that would last only moments before they both died protecting people they’d never before met. They raised their blades overhead at once; their radiant blades refracted the dead light of the pale sun.

For that moment – perhaps the first moment in his entire laugh – Dane was proud of himself.

The Gorgoloth moved closer. The maul in the giant’s hands was covered in fetishes and jagged bone protrusions, and the sling that dangled from the hooks at hammer and hilt was woven of beaded human flesh. Dane crouched down and set his blade. The white eyes of the black giant fell on Dane, and then past him. Dane saw a shadow in the reflection of those eyes: a cloaked wraith that floated through the air in a haze of silver and grey.

The maul swung, and missed, and even as the resounding impact against the stone sent up sparks and echoed through Dane’s skull he leapt forward into the air and arched his vrataar down to take the giant in the throat. At that moment, a funnel of churning flame violently tore the world apart: it was a lance of cold white fire, and it tore through the sky and ignited the air.

Everything happened at once. Dane felt hot blood wash up over him as his momentum forced the dead Gorgoloth to the ground; the impact knocked the wind out of Dane and jolted his limbs with such terrible force that he felt his bones nearly snap. Shouts and steel hammered his skull as he rolled forward and onto the slope, where his motion rolled him painfully forward down loose stone and a rain of sparks. Dane’s eyes opened for a moment, long enough to see the dame escape down from the opposite hill, long enough to see the Cruj struggle against his captor, long enough to see the Gorgoloth sentry walk towards him, languidly. Its bare and clawed feet crunched ice and rock beneath their path as the giant almost playfully advanced to where Dane would end his uncontrolled descent. Its axe was ready, and Dane almost felt it cleave in half well before the haft was even raised and his executioner’s massive teeth gleamed in the white fire, which was just moments before the sky seemed to explode.

There was, for the briefest of moments, a splotch of darkness in the sky: a blot of ink, a hole. Then there was the fire, which erupted in a whirlpool of churning white and blue that had the consistency of ice but that burned with such intense heat Dane almost screamed. Bits of the flaming goop sprayed onto his armor, and if not for his continued fall towards the nadir of the stone bridge the heat would have undoubtedly eaten through his armor. His would-be executioner was not so lucky: the Gorgoloth’s eyes and face were burned in a spray of flaming ice that latched onto its black skin and clung there like a burning parasite. Heat lashed against Dane like whips of fire. Something died in front of him; sticky drops of red rain hailed down onto the snow. The sound of the explosion shook the air.

Dane landed at the bottom of the bridge, hard on his face. He tasted blood and felt ice pressed into his face like splinters. Though the air had been knocked from his lungs, Dane struggled to rise. The fire was gone, but the sonic vibration left in the air in the wake of the strange explosion still resonated. Dane came to his knees with the help of a beautiful blonde-haired woman. She had deep green eyes and a scar down one side of her face, and she wore the black and purple armor of The Fallen, even if she bore a Dawn Knight’s blade. Dane looked behind her, and saw that all of the Gorgoloth had shared a similar fate as that who’d been ready to kill him: their flesh had been burned away by the same dreadful fires, the fiery plasma vomited up by their burning hole in the sky. Their bodies writhed on the ground all along the bridge and on up the slope that led to the far ridge; smoking vapors rose from their immense corpses.

© 2007 Steven Montano


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Thursday, November 22, 2007

Happy Thanksgiving!

(There's not much more to say when you're as bloated and tired as I am from having consumed 87 pounds of the world's best Holiday food. ;)

Wednesday, November 21, 2007

DDM WOTC Internal League: Match Update

A busy work schedule and the general wussiness of my fellow gamers here at work has led to my only being able to get 2 games played in the League thus far, and I'm honestly not sure how many more there will be...that being the case, here's a quick summary of my second match.

Mount(s) Doom!, v 2.0
Eternal Blade (54 points, Commander 4)
Rage Drake (65 points)
Nightmare (44 points)
Blood of Vol Fanatic (30 points)
Boneshard Skeleton (7 points)
Map: Market Square
5 Activations, 200 points

vs.

Steve Winter (Website Manager, D&D RPG)
Eternal Blade (54 points, Commander 4)
Mercenary General (43 points)
Large Fire Elemental (31 points)
Blood of Vol Fanatic (30 points)
Shadar-Kai Assassin (24 points)
Statue (10 points)
Flamesnake (8 points)
Map: Hellspike
7 Activations, 200 points

Map Played On: Hellspike
The Winner: Mount(s) Doom! strikes again
Final Score: 190-37

New Piece: Nightmare! (which will not be used, as I've already given it to my daughter as a consolation prize for having an extremely crappy Monday...she's been drooling over that piece since she first saw it)

Tuesday, November 20, 2007

Nestor: The Triumphant Conclusion

If you've stuck with it this far, then you deserve to see the happy ending....go, Nestor! (Tomorrow we return to something...a bit more normal. Sorry about this, but it had to be done.)



Monday, November 19, 2007

Nestor 2: The Revenge!

Things get a big darker here...not for the faint of heart!



Sunday, November 18, 2007

A Holiday...Treat?

My wife grabbed the video of this cute little claymation film at my request: I saw that Mike Nelson had done a Rifftrax for the short, and since it was from the same people who made the old Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer, Frosty the Snowman and Jack Frost specials, I thought it looked like fun.

Things were darker back then. While in the end this is a cute little story (about the Donkey that saved Jesus...yes, you read that right...), it's also pretty freakin' depressing. There are some things you're not used to seeing in Chrismtas specials, like...well, I don't want to give too much away. Enjoy Part One of this Three Part Story, "Nestor, the Long-Eared Christmas Donkey" (or, as my wife referred to it, "Bambi 2: The Revenge!").



Saturday, November 17, 2007

Excerpt from "The Ending Dream" (Chapter One, Continued)

The sky never changed: Dane felt sure it should have been night. He’d wondered for what felt like days. Admittedly, he’d moved slow, for more Gorgoloth had made themselves known, most of them burdened by sacks full of slain Jlantrian soldiers, and Dane had been sure to keep to the shadows of the still-endless ruins. His skin had grown used to the biting cold, but his armor had grown heavy, so he’d slowed his pace, taking extra care to not attract any attention. He felt like a coward, but he’d convinced himself there was no point in getting killed: if he saw any fellow soldiers he’d go to their aid, but though Dane sometimes still heard the sounds of distant battle he never saw any, and by the time he reached any fighting it was already done, always with the black giants victorious.

All the time, Dane wondered where he was, and how he’d gotten there.

That he’d somehow wound up in the Reach was beyond question. The Gorgoloth had no foothold anywhere else, not after the Rift War, and it was known that their numbers were greatest there, in that frozen wasteland west of the White Dragon Empire, where the Thirteen Towers keep the black-skinned brutes at bay. Dane didn’t remember them ever being this large…the Cruj were giants, true, but they and the Gorgoloth, though once allies, were different races. Maybe this was something new.

How did I get here? What happened to the Veilwarden who saved me?

The more questions he asked, the less he remembered. So he pressed on.

Dane found shelter for a time in what looked to be the hollowed out remains of an ancient church. Shattered pews lay covered in drifts of frozen and ice blue snow; shards of broken glass had petrified like fossils inside sheets of frost on the stony ground. Desperate as he was for a fire, Dane knew he didn’t dare, so he huddled in a corner, back against the wall and vrataar on his lap, and rested his eyes. Shadows passed through the tall, long shattered windows over his head now and again, but nothing disturbed him. He nursed the scar on his cheek – the shape of the wound told him someone, a human someone, had raked at his face with fingernails – and tried his best to rest without sleeping.

She falls up.

He sees a field of ruin: a plain of red sand, surrounding by tributaries of brackish water. The forces descend upon the city, a city with no walls, no defenses, and no reason at all to be nestled so far from any other civilization, so far from anything that can protect it.

Dane woke to a woman’s screams. At first he thought it was part of the dream, but as he shifted the muscles in his sore neck and straightened his stiff back against the crumbling wall it came again, closer than any of the sounds of battle he’d heard that day before. The scream sounded yet again; this time, it was followed by a bellow, a bestial roar that cut through the air like a fistful of knives. Dane sprang to his feet.

Fresh tracks lay in the snow outside the church, as well as fresh blood: a trail ran from the direction Dane had approached from to a narrower expanse of the mountain, a crumbling ledge from which chunks of snow-laden rock detached and plummeted into the fog below. Dane advanced cautiously. The way ahead narrowed and descended, and while Dane could see where the mountain ledge elevated and widened on the far side, from his vantage near the ruined church he couldn’t see anything that happened on the depression ahead. He was now close enough to the edge to gaze full on into the vast empty space below. A curtain of white mist lay hundreds of feet below: there was no telling how high up he really was, but judging from the sharp pull of the wind and the thin quality of the air he guessed several thousand feet, easily as high as the Razorback Mountains he’d spent so many of his years as a Dawn Knight in, and maybe even as high as the Titans.

He sees the dead girl. She stares up at him from the mud; her eyes are locked forever open.

Dane shook himself to.

What the hell is wrong with me?

The scream came again. Dane held his weapon ready, and cautiously advanced far enough to peer down the mountain path to see what lay at the nadir of the natural bridge. His armored boots threatened to give way at the icy stone beneath him, but Dane crouched down and used the weight of his sword to lend him balance.
The shelf of rock below him was wider than he would have expected, but also thinner – even from his elevated vantage, it was clear that the bridge was only four or five feet thick, and beneath the stretch of stone lay a sea of frothy white fog. Thick banks of snow and black ice formed low walls on the natural bridge, which was just wide enough across to accommodate the size of the wrecked sailing ship that had somehow landed there. Dane blinked, sure that he’d lost his mind. The ship was ancient, a small galley whose hull had been breached in numerous places, enough that one could peer into the hollow innards of the lower decks. Tattered and snow-covered sails fluttered in the heavy wind, and the level of decay and frost of the old wood indicated that the vessel had been wrecked some time ago, even if there was no visible clue as to how a sailing ship had been marooned on the top of this vast peak. The bow of the ship dangled just over the edge; Dane watched a whip of wind tear away some loose boards and send them sailing off into the icy air.

Two Gorgoloth held a fourth giant, who’d been tied down and forced to its knees just in front of the ship. It was a Cruj: of that Dane was certain, even though he’d never seen one in person before. The Cruj were known for their extreme size and enormous girth, and if the Gorgoloth were only vaguely humanoid in nature, the Cruj were even less so: its head was square and squat and little in the way of a neck, its mouth was large and filled with blunt teeth, and its arms and legs all seemed too large for its body, branch-like and simian. The Cruj giant towered over the Gorgoloth, who in turn were larger than the human prisoners huddled together and held at bay by a bloodied maul yielded by a fourth Gorgoloth. They were all just about a hundred feet away, at best, but Dane made out three: the screaming woman and two men. All of them were in manacles, and held together by a length of old iron chain.

The whole scene was something from a nightmare. The Gorgoloth were known to the Empire, and feared. The Cruj were even more feared, but most people had never seen one: they’d acted behind the scenes during the War, serving Vlagoth as her war engineers and advisers. The brutal, Veilcrafted war machines that the Cruj built for use during the Rift War were legendary, as was the death toll they’d brought about. Dane didn’t know why these Gorgoloth – who’d once served the Cruj as Vlagoth’s soldiers – would be beating this one now, and he didn’t much care. He wasn’t worried about them, but about the human prisoners, and what the woman screamed about: a fourth human prisoner who lay at the feet of the guardian Gorgoloth and who lay face down on the ground at the giant’s feet. Dane wasn’t positive, but he thought it was a child.

“Time to die, I guess,” he muttered. He hoped they wouldn’t be his last words…he’d always hoped to say something more profound just before he died. Regardless, Dane decided to take the direct approach: there was no cover at all between himself and the ship, and as much as he’d have preferred to use a ballista on the Gorgoloth, that wasn’t exactly an option. “Giants!” he shouted.

© 2007 Steven Montano


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Friday, November 16, 2007

MST3K -- "Why Study Industrial Arts?"

Still one of my favorites.




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Thursday, November 15, 2007

Another Another Just A Quick Blog

Long day. Work sucked. That's all for now.


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Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Another Just A Quick Blog

It's been a long week...work is crazy, I've been trying to find time for DDM games both online (EC) and at work, I'm only barely meeting my daily writing quota, and we were without a car for 3 days as it was getting a new O2 sensor and a coolant flush. Sheesh!

So enjoy my daily writing widgit (that sounds dirty, for some reason), and hopefully at some point I'll find time to blog about something a bit more amusing than my busy life. :)


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Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Match Report: DDM Internal League

My Band: Mount(s) Doom!
Drow Spider Priestess (43 points, Cmdr 4)
Rage Drake (65 points)
Nightmare (44 points)
Blood of Vol Fanatic (30 points)
Shadow Mastiff (17 points)
Map: Magma Keep

My Opponent: Chris Lindsay (Online Media Training & Operations Manager)
Eternal Blade (54 points, Commander 4)
Astral Stalker (45 points)
Umber Hulk Delver (36 points)
Blood of Vol Fanatic x2 (60 points total)
Farmer (3 points)
Map: Mithril Mines

Map Played: Magma Keep
Final Score: 205-40
Winner: The Mounts Rule!
New Piece Acquired: Eternal Blade


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Monday, November 12, 2007

Aggro-Industrial Flashback 1993

Remember this one? If not...well, you probably weren't cool like me. ;)




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Sunday, November 11, 2007

An Excerpt from "The Ending Dream"

His eyes snapped open. He stared into a white void: a dead sky as pale as bones. He felt himself fall into and out the sky at once, torn from one world to the next. Briefly there was a sensation of falling, and a sickening jolt as the earth rushed up to meet him. He hadn’t really fallen – somehow he knew that, even before he knew who or where he was.

He woke from a nightmare of ebon mirrors and carrion mists, and fell back into himself.

For a moment, Azander Dane believed that he was dead: he felt weightless and cold, adrift in a white sea. Cold gripped him like an icy hand, and heavy pain pushed against the backs of his eyes like a fire in his skull. His breaths came slow and ragged, and something thick and wet covered his face. After a moment his dizziness subsided, and he came to realize that he lay on his back in a bed of snow. Frozen wind tickled the wide scars on his left cheek, and as he exhaled he felt blood trickle up from between his lips. Heavy white flakes drifted across his vision like dying birds.

She falls into the sky.

The white void was silent for a moment, but after he took in a long breath Dane ccould hear again, and the noises of battle crept into his senses like a sluggish wave, slowly at first, but then the chortled cries built to a crescendo, and the clash of steel hammered down on him like breaking glass. The perfect white space of his vision was interrupted by a shadow – long, thin, but it grew bigger. It was only at the last moment that he realized it was an axe blade, and Dane rolled up and out of the way.

His muscles screamed. The snow-covered stone sparked from the blade impact behind him. Dane stumbled and tripped on his own cape. His armor, though designed to be lightweight, seemed to weigh a ton as he ripped the cape away and rose to his feet. He wore no helmet, but his vra’taar was in hand, a long hand-and-a-half blade with a wicked edge and a short blade that protruded from the hilt like a baneful tooth. The air swam. Dane dimly registered the chaos of a battle all around him, but he only had a moment before the Gorgoloth was on top of him. The black-skinned brute was easily two heads taller than he was and twice as broad in the shoulder, and his knotted muscles strained with visible effort as he hefted his bone-white axe over his head in preparation for a crushing blow. Dane saw the ruins of a building behind the brute, so dark that the Gorgoloth nearly disappeared in its shadow. He senses movement behind him, and knew that another one of the beasts was closing in. Head spinning, Dane steadied himself, set his feet in the snow and prepared for the charge.

The Gorgoloth behind him leapt first. Dane saw its shadow fly towards him in the light of the frozen sun, and in spite of his fatigue he spun on his heel and took the misshapen, white-maned head from its shoulders with one swing of his blade. Black blood sprayed onto his face and chest. Instincts drove him. He turned in time to meet the first Gorgoloth, unarmored like his fellow so that Dane saw his scarred chest lined with rings and scars as he dove forward with an axe nearly as tall as Dane. Dane crouched and set his sword; the Gorgoloth’s reach would bring the axe down before it landed on his blade, so he waited, waited, and at the last moment threw himself forward, under the arc of the axe’s swing and into the ebon torso, where his blade chewed through bones as hard as steel and pushed through the stomach and out of the creature’s back.

Dane cursed. He’d missed its heart, which meant it was far from dead. A painful blow landed on one armored shoulder, and he felt the creature’s hot breath on his face. Large fangs like those of a wild cat bore down on him as the Gorgoloth struggled to rip the blade free. Dane put his weight down, twisted and pushed, and then he dropped back and fell away from its claws and teeth as he released his blade. The Gorgoloth hunched forward to follow, and he felt hot pain flare across his back as its nail-like claws raked through his armor. Its death groan rarrled against Dane’s ear as it pushed itself further onto his blade and impaled its own heart on the steel. Dane rolled away and tugged his blade free, and stumbled to his feet.

He stood at the outskirts of a ruined city at the edge of a vast canyon. Fighting raged all around him: black-skinned, bare-chested Gorgoloth with mauls and axes ran down scores of Jlantrians, most of which were soldiers who looked barely capable of putting up a fight. Cold wind howled through nearby ice-capped mountain peaks. Collapsed buildings, blocks of rubble and wrecked wagons lay strewn everywhere, some halfway out over the cliffs, all in such ruin that they must have dropped out of the sky.

Where are we?

An axe-head flew through the air, and Dane had only a moment to deflect it before he was attacked again. Four more Gorgoloth flew at him. Their giant mauls were soaked with steaming blood, and deep scars and tattoos cast in silver ink marked their midnight-hue skin. They towered over Dane and came in from all sides like a phalanx of shadows. Dane moved reflexively, thankful that his black and gold Dawn Knight’s armor was much more flexible than it looked, for although metal plates covered his vital areas the joints were leather and chain mesh, allowing him to dodge away from the first few maul blows that tore apart stone and snow in a shower of wet sparks. Their mauls were crude things of stone and wood, but with their reach the four giants could easily take their time; Dane would never be able to get close enough to do any harm, and since they were unarmored they’d easily be able to chase him down if he took flight. Dane crouched low, readied his blade, and waited for them to come at him.

A circle of cold blue fire erupted on the ground between Dane and the Gorgoloth, and they hesitated. The flames gave off no heat, and they crawled and twisted unnaturally into the air, pushing the giants back as the flickering arcane light illuminated their blank white eyes. Dane caught motion out of the corner of his eye, but he didn’t dare move – even with the flames, the Gorgoloth looked ready to pounce. He tightened his grip on the vra’taar and tensed for an assault just as the flames flashed in a noisy explosion: a sound like thunder fell straight out of the sky and crashed down to the ground. The blue-white flames funneled into a whirlwind of frozen fire that erupted into the sky.

The Veil.

Dane turned and ran, knowing full well that the distraction wouldn’t last long. The Gorgoloth’s cries of fury and alarm were barely audible over the roar of the fires as they reached like dancing ghosts into the pale sky. Dane raced through the remains of a rubble-hewn lane, through cold blasts of wind-blown snow and intermittent walls of smoke and ash. Fighting went on just out of sight: every glimpse that Dane caught of battle was the aftermath, when there was only broken bodies and broken weapons left to show that there’d been fighting at all. Dane followed the shadow of his savior, the Veilwarden who’d crafted the arcane fires that had kept him alive, but every time he drew close the shadow vanished, just out of sight around the bend of a building or over another outcropping of rock.

The limits of the city were almost unfathomable. Shards of shattered stone and splintered wood lay in every direction. He was on the top of a tall mountain, for the sky was thin and Dane could see the majestic void of snowy valleys beyond debris that went on and on, acre after acre of discarded civilization left like refuse on the face of this frozen peak. Dane came upon bodies and ruin, and only occasionally did he spy other living things: when he did, it was always Gorgoloth, tall and ebon-skinned, white manes and whiter eyes like extensions of the snow.

Dane ducked in and out of hiding places. He wasn’t sure what direction he traveled in, or if he was moving closer or further from the mountain’s edge, because for all that he could see the narrow crest of the ridge went on forever, like it wasn’t so much a mountain he walked on as an endless and vastly tall wall of ancient natural stone that thrust from the snowy landscape like a vast scar.

The cold numbed him. Frost accumulated on Dane’s blonde stubble and gauntleted hands, and his throat grew raw from the air. He moved quickly and quietly, ducking in and out of ruins. He passed through the shattered remnants of inns and homes, a woodworker’s and a smith’s, but most of the structures were beyond his ability to identify, too ruined by whatever devastation had brought them here to be anything more than torn debris. Dane’s boots uncovered lost things in the snow: broken spinning wheels and old tables, children’s dolls and rusted axe-blades. Shadows moved around him, made thin and long by the sickly pale sun hidden by an invisible veil of ghost-white clouds. The sky had no depth, the peaks went on forever, and even the howl of the wind wasn’t enough to cover the cries of the dying.

I’m dead. I have to be. This is hell.

Still he walked.

© 2007 Steven Montano



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Saturday, November 10, 2007

Just a Quick Blog

I actually have quite a bit to blog about, but at the moment I'm trying to tie up today's writing and then I'm off to go watch Season One of "Lost" with my daughter, so hopefully I'll get to bigger better stuff tomorrow. Have a good weekend!


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Friday, November 9, 2007

A New Film Makes the Favorites List

Last night, something incredible happened: a new movie was added to my all-time favorite list.

This doesn't happen very often. While I am something of a film geek, and indeed I own more movies than any person has any right to ever own, over the past few years I've found my tastes growing something...jaded. Maybe it's the bitterness of approaching middle-age. Maybe it's from watching too many Rifftrax. Or maybe it's just due to the fact that I've seen waaaaaaaaay too many movies, and any more something has to be pretty extraordinary to actually impress me.

I try to find new favorite movies...I really do. I thought that "300" would be the big movie this year to really blow me away, and while I did indeed find "300" to be one very exciting and finely crafted film, something about it left me a bit let down. Maybe because it delivered what it promised, but nothing more. Maybe my expectations were too high, since it was really the one film released in 2007 that I was looking forward to. Whatever the case, "300" was very good...but not great.

So, lo and behold, it wasn't a 2007 movie at all to make it onto my coveted by somewhat elusive "list", but a leftover from 2006: "Apocalypto," Mel Gibson's adventure epic about a man trying to survive the beginning of the end of the Mayan Empire and save his family in the process.

Mel Gibson may have gone a bit wacko in the past couple of years, with anti-Semitic drunken outbusts, DUIs and verbally abusing film students who ask him too many questions, but DAMN can he make a movie! Apocalypto has visual and emotional resonance. It's a cutionary tale of what happens to a civilizaton that drowns in its own excess, masked in the guise of an adventure story. It's a foreign language art-house film given an action/adventure makeover. And it's one of the most involving, frightening, and exhausting films I've seen in a long, long time.

Apocalypto is well directed, beautifully shot, finely acted and completely exciting from start to finish (especially the extended chase sequence that occupies nearly the entirety of the final 45 minutes of the film). It's also incredibly well-paced -- I was hard pressed to believe that 2 hours and 18 minutes had passed. As a final word of warning, "Apocalypto" is also INCREDIBLY violent. People put off by violent images will find much of the film simply unwatchable...so you've been warned.

But if you have the stomach for it, and if you can get past the "subtitled" hurdle (it's never bothered me, but I know some people have trouble with subtitled films), then I strongly recommend "Apocalypto". Some of us keep hanging on year after year and keep watching out for the next great film, even when so much of what is made these days is just a waste of our time: films like "Apocalypto" are our reward.





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Thursday, November 8, 2007

DDM Internal League

It's DDM Time Again!

I don't want my silly miniatures hobby to take over the new blog here...but it is one of my only hobbies, so I'd be doing myself a disservice if I didn't at least mention what's going on with that. Rather than go into gory detail, however, I'll keep posts about the DDM Deserts of Desolation League bare bones: following this post, I'll just list Warbands used for any given match, the map that we played on, who my opponent was and the match results (including the final score). I'll also post what new figure I acquired (we're using the "Sideboards" option that we've used in the past, wherein we get to roll for a random miniature to add to our reserve ranks for use in building our warbands).

We haven't had any DDM Leagues here at work in a while (the last one was for Unhallowed, which was well before GenCon), so I'm excited, as much for the opportunity to play with the nutjobs here at work again as I am to finally get my hands on some Desert of Desolation figures.

So, without further ado, my pull from my two boosters were...well, they were crap, but here they are anyways:

Rage Drake (65)
Nightmare (44)
Drow Spider Priestess x2 (43, Commander 4)
Blood of Vol Fanatic (30)
Drow Blademaster (22, Commander 2)
Shadow Mastiff x2 (17)
Snaketongue Cultist (17, Commander 2)
Black Woods Dryad (16)
Tiefling Rogue x2 (11)
Flame Snake (8)
Merchant Guard x2 (8)
Boneshard Skeleton (7)

Hmmm...while I'm not too excited about all of the duplicates, I love the Rares (the Rage Drake and the Nightmare), and even after a core of those two figures and a commander I still have some room to experiment and mess around.

My first version will look something like this:

Mount(s) Doom!
Drow Spider Priestess (43 points, Cmdr 4)
Rage Drake (65)
Nightmare (44)
Blood of Vol Fanatic (30)
Shadow Mastiff (17)
5 Activations, 199 points
Map: Magma Keep

I'll post abbreviated match reports as they occur (the League doesn't actually begin until Monday the 12th). In the meantime, I'm off to finish watching "Apolcaypto" (which thusfar is very, very good) and to finish up some writing. I'll try to put an excerpt from Chapter One up in the next few days.




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Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Some Really Good Writing Advice

This was an e-mail sent to all of the Nanowrimo participants today. It is, quite simply, some of the best writing advice I've ever seen, and I thought it merited being shared:

"The single most important technique for making progress is to write ten words. Doesn't matter if you're badly stuck, or your day is completely jam-packed, or you're away from your computer---carry a small paper notebook and write a sentence of description while you're waiting on line at a coffee shop. I think of this as baiting a hook. Even if you have a few days in a row where nothing comes except those ten words, I find that as long as you have to think about the novel enough to write ten words, the chances are that more will come.

The rest of this advice comes out of my own bag of tricks for getting those ten words and then turning them into many. It may well be that only some of these or none at all will work for you; they may not fit into your life or your own mindset. But if these don't, try and come up with others that do work for you.

Remove distractions. The internet is a phenomenal research and communit y tool without which you might never have started the novel you're working on right now. It is an equally phenomenal tool for procrastination and wasting time. Unplug your connection. While you're at it, put down that book, turn off the TV, shut down the Wii. Make scrambled eggs and salad for dinner. The dishes can wait to be washed. Ideally, get out of your house filled with your stuff that you like and go somewhere where you have nothing better to do than write.

I like writing longhand a lot for clearing jams and rapidly generating new scenes. I don't generally try and write complete scenes when I am writing longhand, I do more of a pencil-sketch version of a scene, all rough and scribbled, drifting in and out of outline form, full of shorthand and initials and incomplete sentences. This is also a easy way to get some polish in without losing speed---when you transfer the longhand to your computer, you'll almost without thinking improve the sentences. And it's fun having a physical artifact to commemorate the work---get one of those nice journals from your local bookstore, and if you are the kind of person who hates to waste money, spend enough on the journal that you will then feel bad if you don't finish the novel.

If characters aren't coming clear, play casting director. Instead of trying to invent a character from scratch, mentally cast someone in the role and try to imagine how they would do it---their physical mannerisms, their vocal tics, the way they hold themselves. The nice thing is, as the casting director of a novel, you are free to cast actors who are booked elsewhere, too young or too old for the role, not actually actors (your next-door neighbor will never know), dead, or fictional (a writer of my acquaintance once cast Madame Bovary as a character in his modern-day novel).

If you're finding a scene boring to write, cut it and skip to the good part. Set something on fire. Have zombies a ttack. Note that boring is not the same as hard. Really great scenes can be very hard to write and take a long time, but if you're sitting there going "god, when will this be over," make it be over. You indeed have that power. It's your novel.

Have fun with it.

Naomi Novik"

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Naomi Novik is the author of the Temeraire series---His Majesty's Dragon, Throne of Jade, Black Powder War, and Empire of Ivory. For more info on Naomi, visit www.temeraire.org.



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Tuesday, November 6, 2007

MST3k - "A Day At the Fair"

Ok, so I'm addicted to posting video links...but this one is freakin' hilarious.





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Monday, November 5, 2007

A New Gadget to Mark My Nanowrimo Progress

This will just start to appear at the bottom of my usual blog, but today it's exciting enough that it warrants a post all its own! :)


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One of my 5-Year Old Son's Favorite Tunes

Saturday, November 3, 2007

The Ending Dream: Prologue

PROLOGUE

The first thing that he sees is the mountain: a vast edifice of black rock embalmed in hoarfrost. It stands like a grim edifice, and it is so immense that it penetrates the pale sky like a blade. Ice winter clouds float across its onyx face; silver mist rolls across the ground, and hovers just above the sluggish crystal waters that flow through the heart of a silver marsh.

Four women sit on the brittle grass, their bare feet in the ice-laden stream. They are fair and pale, skin the color of milk and moon. They are bound in a prison of sleeping trees whose branches lay across the ground like lovers. The jet mountain looms over them, a silhouette that eclipses the clearing they sit in. A gentle wind blows through and ripples their plain brown dresses and long hair; they are caressed as if by a lover’s hands. When they speak he can’t hear them, but he can see their words, like platinum in the dark.

Somehow, he sees their memories: memories of empire. They recall dark buildings slick with black rainfall and streets thick with armor and smoke. Statues of tall men eclipse the dark city in their shadows, and the air they breathed there was heavy with fear.

But this is a better place for them. They sit near the waters and laugh, quietly, knowing that they must keep their presence here a secret. They dream of the present, and though he knows they must be freezing they look at ease. Gossamer branches sway in the distance, and beyond the lavender trees they can see the rising moon, cold and empty, a portal in the clouds.

A sound like a distant roll of thunder approaches, but he knows it is not thunder: it is the unicorns. The girls look at each other, frightened, disbelieving. They knew this day would come, but none of them thought it would be this soon. The unicorn's hooves splash in the water, and their whinnies fade through the mists in an inhuman dirge.

The women run. Their thick wool dresses are heavy with moisture, and the marshy forest conspires against them with sodden earth and thick tendrils of silver smoke.

He tries to help them, but he can only watch. He isn’t really there.

The unicorns emerge from the silver fog in a chain of nightmares. Their skin is black and coarse, and thick jet blood oozes from their eyes, nostrils and hooves. Their eyes are crimson, and their horns are pale and jagged, covered in black scratches that look like wounds. When they whinny their teeth are revealed to be fangs.

They descend on the girls. Only one of them falls, but the unicorns are patient, and they know that they can take the others whenever they want. She is young and thin, with wheat-colored hair that turns red as she is trampled beneath their hooves. Her terrified face is reflected back in their eyes before their horns rend her fragile body apart.

Like in a dream, he sees her fall away from the unicorns, up into the sky, where she is swallowed by rain that falls like tears and into a bed of clouds.

The other women run. They scream and struggle through the marsh, caught after every few feet by thick vines and walls of foliage. Fog cages them.

Again, he sees their memories of empire. Black rain falls onto the steep stone steps that ascend to a grim palace: the heart of the black city they once called home. Silhouettes of soldiers surround them, held upright by their determination to keep their home safe from the faceless advance of a distant enemy. White fires burn in the distance in great pits at the outskirts of the city: dank beacons to light their return. Armor grinds against stone as they march, out of the city and onto fields wet with blood and rain.

He cannot see their enemy: he can only see them die. Men fall in waves, face down in the mud, where they swallow earth and grime before their lives are painfully crushed from their bodies. The women cry for these men in their memory, and he realizes that those dead soldiers are why they are here, or why they will be here, for it has not yet happened.

He tries to reach out, but he can’t. A memory of white nags at him and tries to pull him away, but he stays. He cannot leave them, even though there is nothing he can do.

One by one, they fall. The unicorns are persistent hunters, and they know no mercy. The next of the women is taken when they race across a flat field, hoping to reach safety in a thick copse of trees that they think the unicorns can’t enter because of their great size, but it doesn’t matter. The horn punches through the next woman's back, and blood pours from her mouth.

The third woman is taken in the dark, when she and the last survivor hide in the shadows. They are exhausted, covered in silver ice; their hair and dresses have been soaked through with water, and they huddle together in the dark, in the shadow of tall rocks shaped like broken fingers. They neither hear nor see the unicorns appear, but the last of them – she is tall and older than the others, with bone white hair and high cheekbones and azure eyes – smells the brimstone and blood, the miasma that follows them wherever they go. The unicorns' horns are now brown with blood, and their manes have gone white, a result of their feeding on the sacrifices that have been sent to them. They break through the old stones and trample the third woman underfoot, and the last can only stagger away, empty and lost. She is alone.

He reaches for her, and for a moment he thinks she sees him, and that she wants to reach back.

Her mind goes back to the creeping shadows that hover over the fields of war. Her memories of empire bleed to more recent recollections of that better place, her small paradise filled with silver haze and girls with white skin. In her mind – in his mind – she falls up, into the sky. Even as the unicorns come for her, all that she can think of is how the worst days are behind her, and she falls upward into a world of tears and leaves.

The sky freezes as she falls into its embrace, and there she stays, held in gray stasis: the last victim of a lost age, forever frozen at the edge of her own death.

© 2007 Steven Montano

Thursday, November 1, 2007

The Novel Begins!

Nonowrimo is here! And man....what horrible timing! :)

I lost my water bottle on the train this past Monday. Then I lost my glasses on Tuesday. And then my phone yesterday. (Somewhere in there my sanity went, too....) Gearing up for Year End here at Wizards has been absolute hell. My kids are both getting in trouble at school. And I'm sick.

Ok, enough bitching. Here's my book.

After all of the deliberation and flip-flopping, I did what I knew I ultimately would and went with my original idea. Duh.

"The Ending Dream" is part of the "Crown of Blood" series, but it doesn't exactly fall into the regular trilogy. That doesn't mean it's a prequel...not exactly. I'm thinking of it as a sort of supplmental piece to the 2 3/4 of the four-part series that I've completed to date (with this one, it officially becomes a 5-part series). While logic would dictate that I should just finish Book 3 (which was a plan I had earlier this year) or else finish up the "Razor" trilogy (Plan B), the truth is that the ideas for "The Ending Dream" have been floating around in my head for several months now, and every time I sit down to brainstorm I keep coming back to this. I'm more excited about this project than I have been for any writing in a long time....and since being excited about something is an almost sure fire way to ensure that I'll actually work on it, I figured this was probably the best way to go.

So without further ado, I decided to take a few minutes this afternoon (since, as usual, I didn't really get anything resembling a lunch break) and get started. Check out my progress here.

P.S. To my lovely wife: thanks for your continued inspiration, love and support. (And did I mention that I love your new haircut?)